A Letter to Jack

To Jack,

You have been a very naughty boy, you stole gold, a hen and a violin. You should be grounded for a month. The giants family must be extremely sad. You need to say sorry to the giant’s family. I’m glad you’re not at my school. I will give you one more chance.

Love From

Laila

6 Comments »

  1. Rachel Said,

    March 21, 2014@ 6:22 pm      Reply

    Hi Laila your work is great! I love your fantastic discription extremely

  2. Anna Said,

    March 21, 2014@ 6:26 pm      Reply

    Hi Laila your work is really good I love your fantastic description and how you used extremely.

  3. Becky Said,

    May 9, 2014@ 2:27 pm      Reply

    Love your letter Laila. Nice sentence.

  4. jude Said,

    June 6, 2014@ 9:46 am      Reply

    Well done laila I loved your punctuation and I loved your letter.

  5. bethany Said,

    June 6, 2014@ 9:53 am      Reply

    I like your letter Laila, it sounds like you are talking to him face to face.

  6. Emma Said,

    July 4, 2014@ 7:12 am      Reply

    Hi laila I think your work is amazing keep working hard.


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